Now this is of today Beautiful love songs Air clean up the way That love inside longs Dream to hold high Feelings that are red On horizon afar sky Those evenings have bled
The echo of a dream Once in a life to realize Vision of heart to seem Love’s reverie to actualize
Everything you know That touches the inside Like a morning soft glow That thru air shall glide Moments of your heart That you grow and give Full of its ember start When love you again relive
All that was given a shade In its moment of ricochet From a delusion all made In a Venice green alleyway
Now this is tomorrow With your goals to fulfill Footsteps of times borrow When you climb its hill Passions of yesteryear Those are now complete Sailing thru epoch air On lives memory street
-.- I hate you. Not only are you AMAZING and TALENTED, but you went to Venice as well! The one place in the world I've been set on going to. Grr! Jealousy aside, I don't hate you. I adore your work. It is very interesting and some simple and some complex. Very beautiful.
this picture is beautiful, i love all the colors, the instant i saw this i thought Venice, since i went there a few years ago, i remember the water and everything. <3 i love this picture
instant love! Venice is the most beautiful place that i have ever visited in my life it just has that feeling that makes you want to live there so much to discover you need a life time to uncover everything ah i must stop i do tend to blab when it comes to venice!
-- “Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before; But the silence was unbroken, and the darkness gave no token"-edgar allan poe
I see a romantic place, where lovers travel from all over the World, to be engulfed in love, pleasure, romance, and inspiration for their future.
The gondolier represents the work for this to happen. It is not ignored that he plays his part perfectly.
But the intrigue to this piece comes from the scene itself.
Ordinary lives hanging on the walls (laundry) are dispatched by the the lives of those in the boat seeking romance perhaps.
In other words, the tourists are blind to the fact that life consumes everything, even them.
But the memories are left unconsumed (I added that as a result from the "feel" of your art).
You did it.
You made the observer interact with your work, and take it past what you may have originally intended.
THAT is the mark of a true Artist.
You are a true Artist.
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