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Ballpoint pen on paper and digital colors
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For more information about my artwork: info@benheine.com
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Here Comes My Melody

A poem by Peter S. Quinn

Here comes my melody outside
Heart looked in its beat
Every hour from the indoors hide
Easy comes nowhere street

Love song of ‘a going to nowhere’
Always again from its cast
Footsteps so softly from there
Into the grime are now lost

Day of my day through emotions
Longing to dream there on
Like the wind in its erosion
Till it has blown and gone

Telling you nothing is real
Only the rivers of hearts crying
Do what you most and you feel
Each in your way complying

Now that I have again instigated
It's time to leave once more
Otherwise time wouldn't be activated
Only be stranded in on 'nothing for'

Here comes my melody to sing
With the crowds going this morning
Some notions are not for the lasting
Into times sentimental corning

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--> The poem appeared on [link]
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:iconglimmer22:
glimmer22 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
o.O how do you get such neat lines with ballpoint pen???
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:iconkisekinokami:
kisekinokami Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh wow!
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:iconkarkats-girl:
Karkats-girl Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
yes it is
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:iconjessicaelephant:
JessicaElephant Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist
I love the way you've colored and shaded it :heart:
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:iconbenoitjwild:
BenoitJWild Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Ca me fait un peut penser a Folon mais je ne sais pas si tu aimeras la comparaison...
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:iconreddrago180:
reddrago180 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
cute, love the shading. It made me smile :)
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:iconkyohono:
kYohono Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
great concept, simple, yet clever ... do you know the notes? these look a bit odd but since I'm notes- illiterate i can't put my finger on it O.o ... what did you use to colour this one ?
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:icongilliancarson:
gilliancarson Featured By Owner May 11, 2008
cooool
whats the music to?
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:iconpetew232:
petew232 Featured By Owner May 4, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loving it looks really sweet
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:icongozlanit:
gozlanit Featured By Owner May 3, 2008
I like this a lot!!!!!!!!
:heart:
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:iconjocelynkid:
jocelynkid Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2008
[gasp]

I love this one.
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:iconmthan:
Mthan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2008
This is the greatest non-political art in your page! I really liked it.
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:iconamalia51:
amalia51 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2008
it is charming ...
nice work!

amalia
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:iconmorpheu5:
morpheu5 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2008  Professional General Artist
Everytime I check your gallery, I find it more and more amazing but this is so far the best piece to me.
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:iconla-puce:
La-Puce Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2008
SI bel ensemble ... Tu sais pour moi en ce moment la vie n'est pas la mélodie du bonheur elle ressemble trop à une tragédie. Ce que tu présente reste d'une qualité sans faille, mes félicitations pour toute cette énergie.
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:iconmarora:
marora Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
Nicely done. I love the incorporation of the music sheet. Go check out, Justjournal's page. He's saying some pretty racist shit about muslims and I think it's important to stop the spread of this crap.
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:icontofulabyrinth:
tofulabyrinth Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008   Interface Designer
Mm great portrayal.
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:iconlia1:
lia1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008  Student Photographer
nice :)
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:iconferal-instinct:
Feral-Instinct Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008
Can I call you Dali? :D
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:iconmarius-creb:
Marius-Creb Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent potrayal of the poem, as always. I like the balloon-head.
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:iconpsychobabbles:
Psychobabbles Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008
real nice :+fav:
I like the poems you put here, very beautiful.
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:icondreamer-fox:
Dreamer-Fox Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008
nice:D
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:iconfloriaiglenoir:
floriaiglenoir Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008  Hobbyist
beautiful,excellent work..emotion...bravo!
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:iconnaked-snagle:
Naked-Snagle Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
I love this


:heart:
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:iconme-mellow:
Me-Mellow Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
:heart:brilliant
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:iconsalimzaidi:
SalimZaidi Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
lol.. cool.. :D
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:iconcrystalclearink:
crystalclearink Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
<3

this one is so beautifil, I love how the notes give ti texture and I've always had a thing for balloons, I draw them constantly. I wish this one was a print.
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:iconprincess-nut:
princess-nut Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
:D te kedo bien padre!!!!
me gusto un buen!
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:icontiamat9:
tiamat9 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
I love the linework and style. Great concept and fine atmosphere. Well illustrated.
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:iconfoxgod:
foxgod Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
sweet image. the score sheet?, great background. love the4 balloon.

(hm, the front mountains are shaded opposite way of the back D:).
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:iconthealchemistchamber:
thealchemistchamber Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
awesome! thought you might enjoy this >> [link]
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:iconsimounet:
Simounet Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Pour un amoureux de la musique tel que moi, ton dessin ne peut que me combler ! ;)

:clap:
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:iconfiyonk14:
fiyonk14 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
:rose:
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:iconnecaxaboy:
necaxaboy Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
IT' S VERY BEAUTIFUL!
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:iconthebuild:
Thebuild Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Great piece Ben!

I love your shading and the head as a balloon idea I think it works realyl weel with this piece.
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:iconmoro003:
moro003 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
like the idea a lot
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:iconkite-n:
Kite-N Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008   Photographer
Adorable! :+favlove:
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:iconmidnight305:
Midnight305 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thats cool
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:icondon-tasos:
don-tasos Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
very very nice!
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:iconflamiathedemon:
FlamiatheDemon Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Student General Artist
Very poetical :)
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:iconyamazakimiyu:
yamazakimiyu Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Just one weird (and stupid) question: Is that a baloon or a head? Since the character's head either pointy or....?
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:icontibodinjay:
TibodinJay Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Nice :D Not the usual gritty comment. i like it :D
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:iconglitchu1:
glitchu1 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
What a nice idea for a drawing :+fave:

I really love it, I love the style, I love the design of the character, well done :D
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:iconpnutts:
pnutts Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Student Writer
the combination of music and art goes hand in hand in this deviation. pretty cool. :+fav:
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:iconseradonna:
seradonna Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it. :3
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:iconbellatrixblacksnape:
BellatrixBlackSnape Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Wow, it looks great! :+fav:
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