This is very interesting. It displays a unique and uplifting message that is smoothly executed and fun to watch.
Very original with your own twist; I can definitely tell it's your work.
However, the flashing black/white is hard on the eyes and sometimes hard to read. Although the animation itself is smooth, I would recommend either slower moving frames or more in between colors to make up for the stark contrast between the black and the white.
Overall, this is a very neat piece, and I hope to see more animations from you in the future, as you are very creative and original.
Very original with your own twist; I can definitely tell it's your work.
However, the flashing black/white is hard on the eyes and sometimes hard to read. Although the animation itself is smooth, I would recommend either slower moving frames or more in between colors to make up for the stark contrast between the black and the white.
Overall, this is a very neat piece, and I hope to see more animations from you in the future, as you are very creative and original.
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