After the rain, here come the colors. If you wish, you can see 3 preparatory photos (it was really raining just before I took the pic) and 2 details at this link. This is an image I captured a few days ago in the frame of the "Tour De France Photo"...
Well done my man! Well done! As far as some of the "photography" I've seen on this site, this is pretty badass! Well. Enough abuse of the shift+1; down to the critique.
There's quite a bit of stuff that I like here. The costume is great. It really makes every part of the model look good (except for two areas which I'll get to in a sec.). The transition from dull, gritty greyscale, to a bright, bloomy rainbow, while not very original, is done very well. Hell, you're the first person I've ever seen get it right!
Now, onto the parts that need help. I mentioned liking all but 2 parts of the model. To be exact, her face and hair. Her facial expression is, no offense to the model, an eyesore. She looks at the camera with a bitter, almost disgusted look on her face. And her hair sadly doesn't float well with that particular costume.
Well, Mr. Heine, that's my critique. It's been a pleasure reviewing your picture. Well done.
i must say this is vary well done the colors are blended together vary nicely with the wall and you even mad a nice clean cut with the floor the emotion is vary strong with the simple meaning of black and white but using rainbow in the place of white still there is one thing i must add on it i do not know if it was on purpus or not but the model looks fairly new she has the body language down but she looks vary angry or almost being mean to the camera but still i must say its a great shot you just need to have your model work on it a bit more with her face
I absolutely love this concept, but the model... Is kind of not good. I'm not getting anything from her, other than a grimace and awkward-awkward pose. I feel like this picture could be amped up 10 fold if someone better was used here.
There's quite a bit of stuff that I like here. The costume is great. It really makes every part of the model look good (except for two areas which I'll get to in a sec.). The transition from dull, gritty greyscale, to a bright, bloomy rainbow, while not very original, is done very well. Hell, you're the first person I've ever seen get it right!
Now, onto the parts that need help. I mentioned liking all but 2 parts of the model. To be exact, her face and hair. Her facial expression is, no offense to the model, an eyesore. She looks at the camera with a bitter, almost disgusted look on her face. And her hair sadly doesn't float well with that particular costume.
Well, Mr. Heine, that's my critique. It's been a pleasure reviewing your picture. Well done.
still there is one thing i must add on it i do not know if it was on purpus or not but the model looks fairly new she has the body language down but she looks vary angry or almost being mean to the camera but still i must say its a great shot you just need to have your model work on it a bit more with her face
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