When the day is onto the night And my feelings are scattered around In the depth of its embracing flight With my heart in it nowhere found
When the clouds are drifting on high And my shadows are growing here still With a passion fallen to nearly die In pointless mixtures of nothing to fill
I know my love is like clouds in sun Rivers of going to the endless sea Every thought is then on its own run Departing all the steps inside of me
Love song that came and had to go wrong With a dream in its black and white blue Something to sing in an ongoing song Everything there except the part of you
Sky of its falling onto the deep Flowers of moments that never were here Eyes of our emotion in bottomless sleep The lights of our feelings once so near
You gave me dreams that never seem thru All is thus endless and sleeping with stars The days of continual all belong to you Times are a changing deep wounds and scars
I love the compilation. I have one critique though. At least on screen the edges where you cut out the individual pieces show. The linear edges tend to distract and pull your eye away from the focus of the piece. Yet again I love the thought process and creativity that went into this work. Good job.
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